I like it, but it feels like you're focusing more on the people around you than your poi. Although, if that's what you're going for, then cool. :P
although, constructively; you should work on your plane control. I could tell that you unintentionally started bending your wall plane to face other people, and that's fine - but it looks much cleaner if you do a move like a plane changing stall, and shows how you can work the crowd.